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spaceship II by drachenmagier spaceship II by drachenmagier
Second drawing of the same kind, mostly because I enjoyed the technique a lot AND because I felt I could do better on the details of the ship. :D I think it worked.

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Spaceship by drachenmagier
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:iconoakstudios:
Hello drachenmagier

I really like this piece. It has child-like feel to it, like a page out of a children's storybook.

I would add characters on the ship to help give it a sense of scale and invite more of a story to it. The ship appears to be drifting in space. Also the lighting is a bit flat. A definite light source, maybe from the upper right, with well placed shadows would help give the ship and surrounding environment more of a sense of weight, solidity, and dimension.

Otherwise that's it. It is a clear, easy to understand image. It appears to be part of a larger story that should be developed further.
What do you think?
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Well, I think I'll give it a try.
First of all: I love it.
When I read your description I was wondering which other piece you meant. I did remember seeing it when I followed the link and even though it is a beautiful piece as well - compared to this one it is almost (no offense) boring!
In this one you managed to give so much more light - and interesting light that is - which gives the picture more space, more depth in general.
As for the ship: you definitely managed more details! I like the lucidity of the sails making it seem like a foreign material. It is kind of giving me the (no offense again) "Treasure Planet" feeling (I do like that movie a lot!)
The colours seem more vibrant in this piece as well which is only adding to it. And the orange-blue contrast is my favourite!
The clouds frame both the ship and the planet and give the light a from that very bright star in the background a sort of tunnel - making it a wonderful spotlight for the scene!
All together you show an amazing use of technique and composition and I feel at awe looking at this piece and really wonder who might be travelling where on that ship. Personally I would love to see more pictures like these - maybe some more colours (as I imagine space to be quite colourful from what we see on photographs etc.)? Defenitely a very good job at this picture and proving yourself to be able to do better ships ;)
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:iconsketchycat84xxx:
SketchyCat84xxx Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
It's so cool,make me dream about a magic world.
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much. ^^
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:iconproxiide:
Proxiide Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2017  Student General Artist
I love Treasure Planet :3 one of my favorites by Disney
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:iconmelodiasrojas:
MelodiasRojas Featured By Owner May 4, 2017
hi XD chek this one :D www.youtube.com/watch?v=8fqR9z…
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner May 8, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Wheee. X3 Fitting title~!
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:icongosakurago:
gosakurago Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is absolutely breathtaking. Even though the other piece was also very well done, I like the composition of this one more. Beautiful <3
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much~! :D
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Ischalik Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017   Traditional Artist
ich habe diese art Schiff schonmal in einem Film gesehen... ich weiß nur grad nicht in welchem... war's vielleicht "per Anhalter durch die Galaxis" ?

aber trotzalledem ist das nen feines Schiff
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Treasure Planet, vielleicht? :D Recht viele vergleichen die Zeichnung mit dem Film. ^^
Und danke!
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Ischalik Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017   Traditional Artist
jaaa.... der wars
naja, irgendwo komt eines auch dem anderen ziemlich nah :P

schüddebön
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Eh, egal, ich hatte meinen Spass beim Zeichnen, auch wenn Treasure Planet nicht gerade das war, an das ich dachte. -w-
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:iconmummymetaller:
MummyMetaller Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017  Professional General Artist
Me looking at the second spaceship pic- www.youtube.com/watch?v=EUN6KP…
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
O-o wat. Is that really in the movie??
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:iconmummymetaller:
MummyMetaller Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Professional General Artist
Yep! You need to watch it, it's great fun :XD:

Me= www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7Q-jy…
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
XD Very batman. XD Yeah, it seems I have to see this movie.
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:iconmummymetaller:
MummyMetaller Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2017  Professional General Artist
You should; it's good fun :D
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:iconjoanczyk:
JoanCzyk Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Absolutely beautiful! *_* Great job!
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you! :D
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:iconferryqueen:
FerryQueen Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're SO damn talented!
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you! 8D
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:iconmylady-lilith:
Mylady-Lilith Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Bettdecke Teil 2 !!

Da träumt man bestimmt gut Ö_Ö
Man sieht im Übrigen die Verbesserung. Die Farben des Schiffs sind viel brillanter, die Abgrenzungen klarer und die Sterne leuchten so schön <3
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Vielen Dank. ^^ Jup, Teil zwei ging auch einfacher von der Hand.
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:iconharaelthefae:
HaraelTheFae Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
The sails remind me of the ones in "The Treasure Planet". I love it! (My mom as well XD)
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much. ^^ Jup, that's what pretty much everybody said. xD
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MisterDuckerDude Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dude, I like your style. I'm watching you. You do the kinda stuff I really wanna do, but better so I can't critique. I love the colours and the framing and the ship is fantastically done. How large is the piece?
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much~! :bow: Happy to hear you like my works enough to even watch me. ^^
Though even if you just think something might look off, it would be great if you could tell me. :D After all, that's how I can get better. ^^ And you don't need to be perfect to know that something is off, right?

Eh, this one is a bit smaller than A3.
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MisterDuckerDude Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True, true. I'll bear that in mind!
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sevira Featured By Owner May 7, 2016
I love the prow, and the underneath-sail.
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner May 15, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! :D
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:icontostec:
Tostec Featured By Owner May 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love it!
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner May 5, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! :D
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:iconbookovore:
Bookovore Featured By Owner May 1, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like your drawings, this one looks very very very good ! (just one thing : how does it land ?) :D
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner May 1, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Like any other ship, just throwing an anchor~? d: And thanks!
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:iconbookovore:
Bookovore Featured By Owner May 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol, you're welcome ! :)
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:iconindigodragoncat:
IndigoDragonCat Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Looks like Treasure Planet! (Which is a compliment- I really like that movie)
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks. ^^
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:iconnildrin:
Nildrin Featured By Owner Edited Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
The magic of Treasure Planet rebooted *____________*
Wonderful, thanks for sharing!
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much. X3
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AnnaKostyuk Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Adorable and very touching drawing. Thanks for creating it!
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you! :D
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Mr-Pink-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2016
Looks a lot like that spaceship from Treasure Planet.
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! ^^
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Jahary Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Awesome! *_* I like this red-orange and blue-violet color contrast!
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! :heart:
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Lolita-Artz Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
hi :wave: i featured your amazing work here features of the week and more! Judy Hopps icon
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much for the feature! 8D
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Lolita-Artz Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
you are welcome :)
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:iconlorenzolivrieri:
LorenzoLivrieri Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful! The colours, the light and the technique, simply amazing! :)
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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capheind Featured By Owner Edited Apr 14, 2016
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