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Watersword and Stonecleaver by drachenmagier Watersword and Stonecleaver by drachenmagier
Couldn't focus on the commissions, so started to draw glowy things. ^^'
I will get back to the commissions now.

Markers and white ink on mixed media paper.
I discovered slow piano music thanks to the rain trailers now. d:
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Real critiques always highly appreciated. :)

Detailshots upon request posted here: [link]
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:iconcreative-caro:
At first I like to say, that it is an amazing piece!
I really like the technique you used for all the shiny and light parts (especially in the wings). Even with a mostly black backgroup looks the picture really lighning and that express such a big power, thats really great! I put off half a star because of the water, for me it seems a bit more like ice , it acts very rigid.
But all in all I have to say that your work is absolutly great! I love the pose, the swords and the proportions are really nice! But the best are (for me) the wings! I love the way you made them! It´s so creative!
What do you think?
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I love the style and colouring, not to mention the concept.
The composition of the first one looks a little awkward, mainly because of how far the sword extends away from her body. If more of her right wing was shown it would balance out nicely.
In terms of anatomy, the muscle structure of her right arm (in the first image) doesn't look right. Use a reference to see how the muscles are woven together.
While I can certainly see why you placed the wings where you did, it would also make more sense if they protruded near the shoulderblades.
What do you think?
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:iconmarikelricxiii:
MarikElricXIII Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Cool
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. ^^
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MarikElricXIII Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
welcome
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:iconmartael:
Martael Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Gorgeous... I absolutely love how her hair drapes over her body... amazing job on the coloring too :)
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much. ^^
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Scintillant-H Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013   General Artist
hello!!! :heart:

I recently started just drawing for some vague practice things from DC/Marvel comics and other sources and when I got to "wings" I just went through the images I saved in a folder on my computer and found this long-ago faved dA image and thought "perfect! .............. where did I find this again? ^^; " I knew I found this on deviantART but it was so long ago that I faved it, I lost it in my fave gallery >///< but I used reverse-image-searching on google to find you again ;)

here be my redrawn sketch --> [link]

I'm not looking for faves or kiriban, just if someone redrew my work I'd want to know, so I thought I'd give you a friendly heads up :) I'm going to ink the image and scan that as well, but I'm not going to color it. I'm not making an exact copy, just sketching for practice. :hug:

thanks for reading! :heart:
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the link! :D I always love to see what others create based on my drawing. :heart:
Btw, when you do not rename the files from dA, you should find the username of the artist in the filename. Which is why I never touch the names, makes it easier to find stuff later on. ^^
Buuut, learned that from mistakes too.
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:iconblyostochka:
Blyostochka Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist
luv it
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. ^^
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:iconfish-with-a-knife:
Fish-with-a-Knife Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm really in love with the way you draw wings and feathers. I just really like the way they're stylized.
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! :heart:
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:icontayaspirits:
Tayaspirits Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful.
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! :D
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:icontayaspirits:
Tayaspirits Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
acourse :D
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:iconveterilu:
VeTeRiLu Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist
So magic and majestic!

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Master Piece!
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much. ^^
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:iconveterilu:
VeTeRiLu Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist
very welcome! :D:D
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:iconyoshiroazamaki:
YoshiroAzamaki Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE YOU. *fangirls* ALL of your work is amazing... >.<
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw, thank you! :heart:
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:iconyoshiroazamaki:
YoshiroAzamaki Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love your stuff! Lol
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:iconyounglordphantomhive:
Amazing <3 n_n
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :D
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:iconyounglordphantomhive:
YounglordPhantomhive Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
Sorry double post, phone stuffed up u.u
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Huh? Nope, not that I can see. O-o
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:iconyounglordphantomhive:
YounglordPhantomhive Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
Oh, NVM. >.<"
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Happens. :D Phones are a bit weird in that sector.
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YounglordPhantomhive Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
Indeed U.U"
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:iconyounglordphantomhive:
Amazing <3 n_n
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! :bow:
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MummyMetaller Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Absolutely awesome :lol:
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :D
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:iconlorcorulimlug1516:
LorCoruLimlug1516 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Die Rückansicht finde ich cool, sehr gelungen. Sowieso finde ich es immer schön, wenn man mal wieder Geflügelte mit Flügeln an den Lenden sieht :) Gibt es viel zu selten, trotz dessen, dass es anatomisch möglich ist.
Das untere mag ich von der Person her mehr, vor allem das Design, beim oberen ist das Schwert sehr klasse, mit der Schlange und dem Wasser. Insgesamt geniale Colos, vor allem mit den Hintergründen dazu.
Weiter so!
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Vielen Dank. ^^
Man kann Flügel so ziemlich an jeder Ecke vom Menschen anbringen. d: Ich glaube, irgendwann mache ich mal eine Zeichnung DAVON. d:
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LorCoruLimlug1516 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
XD Auch eine geile Aussage. Man muss einfach nur schauen, dass die Anatomie logisch bleibt. Man kann auch die Arme umfunktionieren und die Finger wie eigentlich es gehört, zu Flügelfingern ausbauen.
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
An sich ist die Anatomie von jeglicher Art Engel nicht logisch, da Lebewesen mit 6+ Gliedmassen EIGENTLICH Insekten sind. d:
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LorCoruLimlug1516 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
Insektenengel XDD
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Mylady-Lilith Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Schön, die Art wie du die Flügel gemacht hast. Die Farben in Verbindung mit der Transparenz gefällt mir sehr gut!
Glühende Dinge also... xD
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Vielen Dank~!
Leuchtendes Zeug gefällt mir immer. d:
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:iconmylady-lilith:
Mylady-Lilith Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wenn ich jetzt also ein leuchtendes Marshmallow in die Luft werfe, dann gefällt es dir auch?? *_*
*eine Spur aus leuchtenden Sachen hinter mir her leg*
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Total, es leuchtet. Aber essen würde ich es nicht. o-o
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:iconmylady-lilith:
Mylady-Lilith Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
... Wieso nicht? °0° es wäre sicherlich sehr traurig, wenn du es nicht zumindest probieren würdest! Außerdem hat ein leuchtendes Marshmallow sicherlich magische Kräfte!! *_*
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Neeee, aus Games weiss ich: Leuchtendes Zeugs sorgt entweder für mächtig Probleme oder es tötet sofort. d:
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:iconmylady-lilith:
Mylady-Lilith Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Und wenn sich der leuchtende Marshmallow in eine Fee verwandelt, die dir vier Wünsche gewährt?
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Da würde ich schnell wegrennen. d: Wünsche tendieren dazu, nach hinten loszugehen. Jemals die Geschichte der Affenpfote gehört?
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sweetsweetsunshines Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just beautiful ^^ I love everything, especially the details <3
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! :bow:
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:iconraemanzu:
raemanzu Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
wow the translucence of the wings is excellent! very glassy.
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:icondrachenmagier:
drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :D
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EndlessShower Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Your coloring style never ceases to amaze me. You have a very good imagination, and hands that can actually DO things jadhfhsdflgslhcfbviwbg
lawl I could draw stuff like you if my hands would listen for once.
This is awesome. You know me, that sword is the shit.
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drachenmagier Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much. ^^
Actually, it's just practice. I still have a few drawing-ideas I don't dare to start now, mostly because I know I still lack the skills for them. :D But with time I can get there. And everybody else too. Practice does the trick. ^^ Always.
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