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Yes... well... THIS *points* happens when you give me coffee, sugar and too much boring stuff to do at work. Instead of the DD-Challenge I should be working on I did that during breaktime. <w<

Another Question... I still have the other files on my hd... the cartoons are rather crappy but I could upload them if there is anybody who wants to see it. So... do you? Random, crappy, strange... <w< Just like my life with external brain. XD

Edit: Ok, will be posted I guess. O_o But I definitely have to redraw some of them since they - nicely said - are not even a good quality.

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I'm exhausted, so...worst critique ever.

There isn't a terrible lot I can say about this piece that's negative. Yes, it is obviously of a lesser-quality of art than your usual stuff, but seeing as comparing this to your usual works is like comparing the Sunday comics to the Mona Lisa, this is not inherently a bad thing. While the art is simple, it's still very good, and the style is fitting for a comic. I enjoy the surprising detail of the zombie; anyone who looks closely will see he's more more detailed than the female (you?), but it is still subdued enough that he's not all In-Your-Face.

The consistency, though, that's what pleases me the most. Just little things, like how the coffee cup and paper transfer from panel four to panel five. I've seen so many otherwise good comics where shit just loves around on random, and trust me: the world is full of little assholes like me who would point this out and then bitch.

A well-rounded comic. The art was simple but not overly so, and met a wonderful balance for the content. I love the zombie, the joke was hilarious, the scenes are reasonably consistent, and let's be honest: it has zombies. This makes everything better!

i'l be returning to bed now. I'm gonna regret this stupid-ass critique when I wake up. DX
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:rofl: :D

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I wanna see the other drawings =I love your cartoons, they are the love lol.

For being bored, this is pretty cool.

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ROFL

I do want to see more -nod nod- I think you should post them X3

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More! Please~? :cookie:

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Lol lol~ That was amaaazingly funny~<3 XDD

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it is a simple but funny joke


the only thing I'm bothered with is the protagonist doesn't react like he's in grave danger. It's seem like the protagonist saw a dress-up zombie rather than having a real zombie approach the protagonist.

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:D Ahaha

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Redraw and uploaaaad~? Pweeese, pwetty pweese or I'll mail you a cookie~? *puppyeyes*

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